Needs work, but otherwise a decent effort for a first try. The tone is definitely a little pretentious and nothing really happens, but that was to be expected. Your choice of themes was questionable, and I'm not sure why you're so resistant to the idea of properly capitalizing sentences. Keep it up!
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Needs work, but otherwise a decent effort for a first try. The tone is definitely a little pretentious and nothing really happens, but that was to be expected. Your choice of themes was questionable, and I'm not sure why you're so resistant to the idea of properly capitalizing sentences. Keep it up!