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Quiara Vasquez's avatar

Two posts from you in 24 hours! What did we do to deserve this bounty...

(I really liked this piece AND the last one)

Ken the cowboy's avatar

Nice

Thorn's avatar

Interesting, what should he have done differently? Stayed with the first wife? Marry someone else? Be more careful with partner choice after giving her everything?

Greg's avatar

I do not read this story as depressing - to me its lesson is that people end up about as happy as they are.

sympathetic opposition's avatar

“People end up about as happy as they are”

This is a great great line but I’m struggling to know how much I agree.

I think it’s at least partially right and on to somethign real. I do think this guy was used, and that it’s tragic that his desire for, and I think genuine capacity for, a deep all-level intimacy was never reached. But also….with the choices he made it couldn’t have turned out any differently, and he was getting something out of those choices in the short term…Like in the Regina Spektor song:

His destiny was just too big to spend

So her broke it into smaller bills and change

By the time he tried to buy the things he needed

He had spent it all on loosies and weed

Basically I think this is the kind of thing that totally happens to this kind of guy. But also, sometimes, they get redeemed! The problem is that I don’t really know how to write that.* Francois Mauriac did!** Viper’s Tangle is obviously about a very similar situation, iconoclast genius lawyer husband, possibly gold digging wife, but the lawyer gets redeemed: https://www.sympatheticopposition.com/p/vipers-tangle

I kind of think my guy could have been redeemed maybe, but this was the best I could do.

*Potentially a bigger problem is that maybe I don’t know how to write that because I don’t know how people get redeemed.

**He knew how to write it. Jury is out on whether he was right about the mechanism.

Greg's avatar

As a young man, after all, he was distinguished more than anything by great capacity for dissatisfaction; of course the world belongs to the Ceasars, a great mercy is that they cannot, constitutionally, enjoy it.

Ava Hernández's avatar

Very striking!!!!!

Deanna Wilk's avatar

A cautionary tale. Truly depressing. There is nothing more morbid than wasted lives.

sympathetic opposition's avatar

I think his clients were happy at least!

Deanna Wilk's avatar

Ok, now you got me laughing! Life’s a rollercoaster.

Contarini's avatar

100% believable.

Good story.